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This is my nineteenth week on this blog hop. I’m continuing this week with an excerpt from my current romance WIP, Resistant. Resistant is a romance set in the middle of the zombie apocalypse. I received my first round of edits for Resistant last weekend. Oh my at the typos. Sorry guys. I hope what I post from here on out will be a little better. I’m nearly through reviewing all the typos and such and will start the few large changes tomorrow. There were a couple of large scenes that my editor didn’t feel went well with the story or that needed further explanation, and once she explained why, I completely agreed. I don’t think any of it has anything to with what I’ve shared so far. I plan to have the novel back to her by the end of the month or the beginning of next month. If everything movies as quickly as I hope over the next few months, I’m looking for the novel to go on sale in August or September. I don’t have a cover yet, which I’m okay with because of the changes. I think I’m going to wait until late June or July to get with him and finalize everything.
Anyway, on to the excerpt. This scene is a continuation from last week’s scene. I hope you enjoy it. J
My hands quickly found the waist of his sweatpants and underwear and began pushing them down his body. He helped when I could only get them so far by shoving them by kicking them off. At no point did he stop kissing me. When he was free from his clothes, I pulled him against me, wanting to feel his body pressed to mine.
His penis pressed into my lower stomach, and absolutely not where I wanted it to press. I lifted my leg up and wrapped it around him. This action shifted our bodies so that his penis rubbed between my legs; still not where I wanted it, but at least where it was it would give me pleasure. We moved against each other, building our need until I begged him to take me.
Unfortunately, he didn’t immediately comply with my request. He lifted his head, wrapped one hand around the back of my neck, and tilted my face so that I was looking up into his eyes. His other hand slipped down between us, rubbed my clit for moment before taking himself in his hand and moving his head to my opening. I held my breath. Once he had positioned himself where he could slide easily into me when he was ready, he brought his hand up and cupped my face.
In a soft, low voice he said, “I love you,” and moved his hips.
Uncontrollably, my head fell back as far as it could, breaking our eye contact. I closed my eyes and let out the breath I was holding in a satisfied sigh as he filled me. The pleasure was so intense, so wonderful, I couldn’t do anything but lie there relishing in the feel of him inside me, stretching me, filling me, and corny enough completing me. He undoubtedly felt the same because he didn’t move in me. He just said my name and sought my lips.
We kissed for a long time that way, but eventually our desire became too much and we had to move. Our lovemaking was slow, gentle, but that didn’t stop me from quickly exploding. Feeling myself tighten around him as I came made my orgasm stronger. I wanted to scream, to beg for more, but we were more or less in the open, and whereas most people assumed we were already having sex, I didn’t want them to hear us doing it.
I took great satisfaction in the fact that he came seconds after I did. I loved knowing that the feel of my orgasm pushed him so far over the edge that he couldn’t hold his. I also loved that he didn’t immediately pull away when he was done. He stayed inside of me, even though he was no longer fully erect, though he maneuvered us so that we were on our sides.
“I love you,” I whispered.
My words caused him to pull me tighter to him.
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